are you sure newgrounds is an appropriate place for a speedpaint?
your art is really good and you're definitely talented, so this gets a 4.5 from me, but it feels like something that should be on youtube or deviantart
eh, regardless of where it's being hosted, its an amazing speedpaint. i was genuinely entertained watching your piece of art come to life, which is hard for me to stay interested in, but you did it. probably because you used traditional pen and paper and the audience can actually see you putting the effort into it. idk. its amazing.